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Name: Oranus Pavli (O for short)
Species: Mutated Demon
Height: 5'6
Weight: 150 lbs
Age: 27


Bio: O is a redesign of [link]

He is an incredibly rich entrepreneur who owns multiple business'. The biggest one he runs is XEO which, on the outside, directs research into various forms of engineering (stem cell research, fuel research, synthetic substances, artificial life, etc...), but on the inside is a recreation facility of the infamous Humanoid Project. This, however, remains completely unknown to anyone but him, the workers, and his sister, Luna.

Aside from that, O is known as a huge investor into ARKANE. When ARKANE fortress was being finished, he helped supply money enough for it to be finished. As a result, he is great friends with the ARKANE leader, and regularly attends parties.

In the first part of the story, he is nothing more than a random character encountered at a party. But during the second part, he helps re-ignite the Humanoid Project. O is a follower of Omega, believing in the same things he does. Because of this, O released a deadly virus onto the world....


But..
Theres also THIS problem: [link]

Personality: Hes polite but incredibly arrogant. He usually looks down upon anyone, especially if theyre poor (believing that the mass majority of poor people is brought upon themselves). He absolutely hates laziness. Luckily, he isnt all bad. Hes nice and very giving and often throws parties for people. Hes also pretty outspoken and a bit of a braggart.



Likes:
-Money (lulz)
-Parties
-His Rapier, "Krato"
-Dress clothes
-Order
-The feeling of being in control
-Omega (specifically Omega's goals)
-Luna
-Politics


Dislikes:
-Light energy (hence why he tries to find alternative energy sources)
-Death
-Kan
-He REALLY hates Eon (due to his high political power and semi-opposing views)


Abilities:
-Areokinesis (control of air, or in this case oxygen)
-Gravikinesis (control of gravity)
-able to generate electricity in huge amounts.
-can cause powerful EMPs
-highly intelligent
-Wields a Rapier
-About 30% of his organs have been converted to light energy, therefore giving him high energy output, high stamina, and resistance to light based attacks.


Stats:
-H.P.: 100
-Attack: 90
-Defense: 70
-Special Attack: 150
-Special Defense: 100
-Speed: 90
-Intelligence: 128
-Will: 150


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Name: Luna Pavli
Species: Demon
Height: 4'11
Weight: 90 lbs
Age: 15


Bio: Luna is the sister of Oranus. She is often seen with him at parties, and knows of the things O strives for. Though, she rejects him for that, and works against him to some extent. She has an incredibly high IQ. She is also greatly admired by a lot of people. Being involved heavily in politics, she tends to influence others decisions greatly by arguing them, or simply because of the people who admire her.

She was "lucky" enough to have witnessed the final battle with Kan, Eon, ARK and Omega. Ever since then she had a special respect for Kan and Eon.

Personality: Like O, Luna is polite and lady-like but has a slight problem with arrogance. She is much less outspoken than O. In fact, she doesnt do a lot of talking unless spoken to directly. She has a great respect for the strong, but little for the weak.



Likes:
-The Strong
-Her Rapier, "Apollyo"
-Kan
-The V Force
-Dress Clothes
-Black Roses
-Casual forms of entertainment
-Money


Dislikes:
-Eon (not because of his views; he bugs her)
-Anarchy
-Big parties (lulzy)
-The weak
-Omega (like effin everybody else.. lol)



Abilities:
-She actually doesnt have any "super-natural" abilities.
-Incredibly high IQ
-Amazing skill with a Rapier


Stats:
-H.P.: 50
-Attack: 90
-Defense: 50
-Special Attack: 50
-Special Defense: 50
-Speed: 90
-Intelligence: 200
-Will: 150

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:iconcrimsonblade2k:
cool chars

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:iconkansaibou:
Ah, why thank you random commenter ^^

much obliged~
:iconlemaffin:
;_;...
I'M poor!

you wanna know something weird?
I subconsciously judge the richer kids, thinking that they're spoiled brats and they get everything they want, and don't know how good they have it. 8D

I feel really bad, I should probably stop doing that.

I'll crit you later bbycakes. *can't think straight*

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:iconlemaffin:
Kk one thing that really bothers me is the fact that Luna looks incredibly tall for someone who's not even 5'. She looks taller than me, haha. O isn't as bad but could be shorter. Uhm, something that's always bugged me a little is how you shade blonds' hair. Like, you use "dark yellow" as the shade, which has always looked, like, GREEN to me.. urgh. I'd suggest using something less saturated but more orange/reddish for that brown kind of look, and maybe using less saturated yellows for blonde hair. (Blonde hair isn't really as yellow as it is white? I guess?)

I can't help but feel kind of stiff looking at these two. Maybe I'm just being picky, but they look really ... posable. Like a mannequin. or barbie and ken, oollol noimjustkiddingdonthitme. It seems like there's not a lot of life to them. fasdffds I don't really know how to describe it, or how you could even fix it (so does it even count as constructive criticism if I don't know how you can fix it?)

Oh, is her little belt loopy pretty thingy supposed to be transparent? if so.. shouldn't the things it overlaps be a shade LIGHTER, not darker? @_@ i mean.. if you look at mesh materials, if it's like light blue and you put it over black, then the black... sdfsd you know what I mean?

Mmm.. here's a tip: when you're shading white, try not to use grey.. it makes it look kind of bland.. I like using light blue or green, or even purple for a snow-white effect. you could probably use any color as the second shade as long as it were saturated correctly and light enough. c:

Oh, I'm noticing a problem with perspective on Luna. Might just be me. It looks like you're looking at her straight on, maybe even a little mix of bird-eye in there, around her torso and chest... and then bam, pantyshot as if you've been looking at her from below the whole time. It kind of throws you off and makes you wonder how she's standing. It's probably not a comfortable position.

When you're shading, you could try using slightly different tones.. not just a darker version of the same color.. that's what I do. Totally a question of your style and opinion though, it's not required or anything. 8D just maffy bein' maffish and suggesting stuff.


kk I'll stop being picky now.
lolpigtails. <3 I really love her hands. I don't know why. DX Loving the outfits. I don't know how you have such skill for unusual and unique designs, but I envy you. grr. Proportions are sexily correct, as usual(aside from the height dilemma) and.. hey, I'm noticing that the colors of their outfits kind of portray their personalities? bloodred = grr evil I support omega! white + blue + black = happy prancy I support kan~ but I'm still related to evil guy so grr.

Haha, I'm soo sorry for being so picky and all, I feel kind of bad for being so harsh but I hope all these critties help! <33
sdffsIjustnoticedthatherfacelookskindofmasculine

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rich people always be the villains XP

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:iconlemaffin:
Duuude his outfit.
is bloodred. = I'm evil. grr.
gold embroidery = I loves money.
And the fur on the back of his coat... kind of looks like angel wings. Like, he's so prideful and he's got such an ego that he's..uh.. : D yeah!

srryforthespam.

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:iconkansaibou:
lulz..

the views expressed by this program are not necessarily the views of the stations. babe...


kk dawg.. just saw your skype message thing bedoop so ima stop typing yo
:iconlemaffin:
lolol okay.

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:iconkansaibou:
LOL.. dun worry maffin, i love your crits.. they be sexy <3

trust me youre helping me more than youre hurting.. TwT

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